POCA PLANET
HI ! want to know more about poca planet...?ok, the poca planet is like a earth, but is smaller than the earth......i do not have the map of poca planet , but some day i will give you see it..... but not now......in the poca planet , the pocamons wound harm it , they care the trees and the animals there , use recycling bag to put they grocery, even the shops was clean and nice !i wish we have a planet like this......well, that enough of talking about the planet... Bye!
dear ah ming,
ReplyDeletelots to read and there are some grammer correction need to be done. use present tense please...the shops are clean and nice
i like your story anway....加油加油！！！